For my audio project, I decided to arrange sound clips of people stumbling over their words, because it is something I tend to do. I do not like to talk a lot and when I do, I mess up my speech, so I made the sound length short.
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Tiffany
11/9/2012 01:35:32 am
I like the idea for your project. I also find it effective to have examples of when people say like and um as fillers for when they are trying to find their words. Ending with "i have mouth problems" leaves no room for questioning what your project's direction was and intention. I think it was well done and just the right length.
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Aaron
11/11/2012 11:05:16 am
I thought your piece was funny and I liked the idea. There are always times when you or someone else stumbles over words and it goes ignored but not this time. I wish your audio piece was longer because I feel you could put more audio pieces in to make your work more effective.
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Amber Steeno
11/12/2012 05:27:10 am
I find the arrangement of the each slice of audio well done. The length of the piece reminds me of how often, when stumbling over your words, you blurb something out and then stop to think or berate yourself before continuing. Great job.
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Dana Morton
11/13/2012 10:50:47 am
I thought this was a really cool idea and I stumble over my words a lot so it was hilarious! The ending really made it clear what your piece was about and I think this is something a lot of people can connect with.
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Brittany
11/13/2012 11:49:52 am
OMG I loved your project!! It was definitely one of my favorites! I find myself stumbling over my words all the time and making a fool of myself at times! Your audio was very entertaining and a great relief from the different scary noises!
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Amena
11/13/2012 11:51:40 am
I really liked the concept of your project. It brings focus and perpective to stuttering and when people stutter. I do agree with Amber that the length helps further establish your stumbling/stutter concept, but I would have liked to hear a few more examples of other people stumbling before it ended, just to be able to compare the different ways people stumble on their words. But, other than that, I really thought the concept was neat and I enjoyed listening to it!
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Nick Goergen
11/13/2012 12:10:44 pm
Although a little shorter than it probably should have been this does get its job done as an art piece. The comedy of the tied tongue is headlined here and it forces us to recall times when we ourselves stumbled, if not faceplanted over our words.
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Jasmine Wilson
11/13/2012 02:15:57 pm
The was great idea. It was funny hearing it recorded because when I hear it in person I tend to laugh as well. Like the others said if it was a little longer it would have been even better.
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Julia James
11/13/2012 02:37:36 pm
I really enjoyed listening to this, I like how you used different voices. It created a great effect, and also made it funny. I love how you used Gollum in there haha that was great. It would have been even better if it was longer, just listening to their conversation. Great job on the project!
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Bianca
11/13/2012 11:52:39 pm
Story of my life right here. Hahaha I can definitely relate to your project because I can be a very clumsy and awkward person at times. I've learned to live with it though hahaha and I love that you celebrate this fun quirk by making it your complete theme for the audio project. Kudos to you, girl! :)
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Kara French
11/14/2012 01:41:55 am
I honestly could see this piece as like a radio commercial promoting something, like a person who works with people on their speech. For how short this clip is, I think it is very effective and I love the clips that you pieced together. Great idea, and great clip.
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Jocylyn
11/14/2012 02:54:31 am
Your idea was so cute! It is creative and expressive of your personality and it must have been tough waiting around for people to stumble over their words in those youtube videos, then again some people don't edit so maybe not. I know you worked on it for a while and it was successful.
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John B.
11/15/2012 09:51:48 am
Greetings esteemed colleague!
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